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Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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In recent years, more and more qualifications are offered online,
instead
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 of in a physical classroom in universities and colleges. I strongly believe that there are more profits than downsides（drawbacks） in
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 trend of education because it is useful for
students
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 and teachers to learn and guide. First of all,
students
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 can use their time more flexibly rather than be limited by commuting.
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, they can develop their interest in multiple fields, and study extra references.
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, over 53% of
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 living in Taiwan have started to engage in online courses that are opened by universities abroad since 2020, and they saved a significant amount of time to immigrate to other countries.
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, they can select which programs are effective for themselves without any restrictions.
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, the professor‘s burden decreases a lot because they can record their course in advance and make
students
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 review it in any situation.
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, they will prevent replying to the common question again, and invest much time in academic research.
According to
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 the report released in 2022 by the National Researcher Office in Korea, the amount of papers increased by 42% because of carrying out online courses.
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, the quality had a vital promotion and brought value to science developments. In brief, it is extremely beneficial for professors to teach
students
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 through online tools. In conclusion, as far as I am concerned,the advantages of the development
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 remote teaching outweigh the disadvantages. Attribute to that it not only increases the resources for
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 but
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grows
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 the efficiency of professors.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unparalleled flexibility
  • democratizes education
  • geographically isolated
  • personal circumstances
  • cost-effectiveness
  • accommodation
  • commuting
  • self-motivated learning
  • self-discipline
  • time management
  • direct interaction
  • feelings of isolation
  • quality and recognition
  • inferior
  • technical issues
  • digital divide
  • reliable technology
  • underprivileged
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