The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

There should be a singular political party that governs every continent
instead
of separate parties for each nation. Does
this
idea have more
possitive asspects
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positive aspects
that will improve the way countries are governed, or will
this
impact be negative for the world? In
this
essay, I will be discussing the distinct advantages and disadvantages that
this
hipothetical
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hypothetical
situation would bring upon the population.
Firstly
, the advantages that
this
proposition could bring would be that every person is a citizen of the planet, with equal human rights for all.
Overall
,
this
would be ideal for the nations.
Additionally
, beautiful
comunities
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communities
of souls would emerge bringing peace and serenity to us all. These would be the results if,
for example
, the worldwide political group would seek
for
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equality amongst every ethnicity, religion, culture, etcetera.
As well as
, if the president searched for the diminishing of poor individuals and the same amount of
oportunities
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opportunities
in the
work place
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and education. These accomplishments would excel the way humans
develope
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develop
developed
themselves in their respective
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, leading future generations towards greatness.
On the other hand
,
on
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the multifaceted world we live in,
this
idea of only having one government could bring a dramatic amount of issues.
Furthermore
, there would be big disputes between groups of people, since it is quite difficult for the majority of individuals to agree on how life should be lived. These
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conflicts are seen in religion.
For instance
, the world's population is formed by many belief
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,
this
is
due to
different perspectives towards life. With
this
in mind, how could 8 billion people
in
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the planet agree with a singular government's regimen?
As a result
, protests against the political
movment
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movement
would occur. Alongside, distinct
ideaologies
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ideologies
would emerge and
discussed
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, revealing a new revolution that wants to achieve a different system with the goal of the right
of
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free speech.
To conclude
, the idea that suggests that the whole globe should be under one regimen could bring both positive and negative impacts.
Moreover
, the humanities
up and coming
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years could be severely affected by
this
political change if it
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to happen. Maybe, a new social pyramid would form,
as well as
how we divide our sustainable resources. These consequences are endless, and could either be an advantage or disadvantage to
human kind
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humankind
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • centralized policies
  • international cooperation
  • global economy
  • trade barriers
  • military spending
  • authoritarian control
  • cultural diversity
  • national identities
  • local issues
  • homogenized
  • decision-making
  • democratic representation
  • world peacekeeping force
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