The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
There should be a singular political party that governs every continent
instead
of separate parties for each nation. Does Linking Words
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that will improve the way countries are governed, or will Correct your spelling
positive aspects
this
impact be negative for the world? In Linking Words
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essay, I will be discussing the distinct advantages and disadvantages that Linking Words
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hipothetical
situation would bring upon the population.
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hypothetical
Firstly
, the advantages that Linking Words
this
proposition could bring would be that every person is a citizen of the planet, with equal human rights for all. Linking Words
Overall
, Linking Words
this
would be ideal for the nations. Linking Words
Additionally
, beautiful Linking Words
comunities
of souls would emerge bringing peace and serenity to us all. These would be the results if, Correct your spelling
communities
for example
, the worldwide political group would seek Linking Words
for
equality amongst every ethnicity, religion, culture, etcetera. Change preposition
apply
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, if the president searched for the diminishing of poor individuals and the same amount of Linking Words
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in the Correct your spelling
opportunities
work place
and education. These accomplishments would excel the way humans Correct your spelling
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develope
themselves in their respective Correct your spelling
develop
developed
environment
, leading future generations towards greatness.
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environments
On the other hand
, Linking Words
on
the multifaceted world we live in, Change preposition
in
this
idea of only having one government could bring a dramatic amount of issues. Linking Words
Furthermore
, there would be big disputes between groups of people, since it is quite difficult for the majority of individuals to agree on how life should be lived. These Linking Words
ideology
conflicts are seen in religion. Replace the word
ideological
For instance
, the world's population is formed by many belief Linking Words
system
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systems
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due to
different perspectives towards life. With Linking Words
this
in mind, how could 8 billion people Linking Words
in
the planet agree with a singular government's regimen? Change preposition
on
As a result
, protests against the political Linking Words
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would occur. Alongside, distinct Correct your spelling
movement
ideaologies
would emerge and Correct your spelling
ideologies
discussed
, revealing a new revolution that wants to achieve a different system with the goal of the right Add a missing verb
be discussed
of
free speech.
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to
To conclude
, the idea that suggests that the whole globe should be under one regimen could bring both positive and negative impacts. Linking Words
Moreover
, the humanities Linking Words
up and coming
years could be severely affected by Add a hyphen
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this
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where
to happen. Maybe, a new social pyramid would form, Correct your spelling
were
as well as
how we divide our sustainable resources. These consequences are endless, and could either be an advantage or disadvantage to Linking Words
human kind
.Correct your spelling
humankind
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