The world should have only one government rather than a national govenment for each country. Do the advantages of this outweight the disadvatages?

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Advantages and
disadvatages
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disadvantages
of having
one
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international raining
government
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rather than having a
variaty
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variety
of national governments each with
their
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its
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own laws and system, on
one
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hand
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, some
belive
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believe
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that it would be better if we
hd
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had
just
one
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governig
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governing
body,
however
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, others
belive
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believe
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that
this
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would
lieave
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leave
no place for
difering
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differing
different
opinions and culture. Having
one
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inarnationaly
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international
internationally
raining
goverment
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government
does have a large
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amount
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of
advateges
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advantages
,
firstly
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when talking about
conficts
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conflicts
that involve a certain area or
geografical
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geographical
zone, a perfect example of
this
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could be the Palestine and Isarel
confilict
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conflict
witch
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which
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curently
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currently
exists because of a simple
giografical
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geographical
disspute
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dispute
,
however
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, if all shared the same legislation and land these conflicts could be
stoped
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stopped
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instantly,
secondly
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, a
lagre
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large
goverment
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government
would be quite beneficial to the global economy since topics like the
golbal
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global
trade market would not be
a
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issue, and
golbal
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global
disputes between countries
wolud
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would
not lead to the economic
colapse
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collapse
of any
one
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place or country.
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hand
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, having
one
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raining
government
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is not fully
befeicial
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beneficial
for all parties since as we know it all governments have
one
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ruler or representative figure witch in
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case, would have an
imense
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immense
amount
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of power, courrently, a lot of the
desitions
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decisions
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polititians
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politicians
take consider
thew
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the
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consequence and
reaction
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the reaction
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of other nations and
posibly
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possibly
difering
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differing
opinions,
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however
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if there is only
one
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govening
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governing
party there is no
one
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that can keep them in
chech
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check
so to speak.
Lastly
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,
curent governmets
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current governments
are based on the idea of religion and culture
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leading
to a vast
amount
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of different
govermental
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governmental
structures that take into
acount
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account
the
traditios
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traditions
tradition
of its people, so having only
one
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governing body would
definiltly
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definitely
lead to the exclusion of a certain group of people,
wether
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whether
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intentional or not,
furthermore
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, some laws could be made to include all culture though it could never include all. To some up, the idea of
one
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large
government
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has a large
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amount
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number
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of
advatages
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advantages
and a
simliar
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similar
amount
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of
disadvatages
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disadvantages
disadvantage
, on
one
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hand
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, it would
complitly
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completely
stop
interational confilicts
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international conflicts
since there would no
longes
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longer
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be
resson
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reason
for
teritorial
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territorial
or economic
dispute
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disputes
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, but
on the other
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hand
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,
one
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international
government
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would lead to
exclution
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exclusion
and
exesive
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excessive
power to
veary
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very
few people.
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