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Nowadays people use social media to keep up with the news. Do you think that they are right or wrong? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#people #media #news #right
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In the present circumstances, many
people
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 use social
media
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 to keep themselves updated with the actuality. I believe that
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 argument has some pros and cons and I will elaborate
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 from my own experience and facts. Since we are living in a world of digitalisation, nowadays
people
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 use their phones and tablets to keep them acquainted with
news
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 and any type of information. But
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, some
news
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 on social
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 might be fake,
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 in Mauritius island, recently there has been some torrential rainfall,
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 there was no school. But on the next day, schools were resuming as usual, but, there was some fake
news
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 mentioning that all schools would be closed again but which was not the case. So I believe that
people
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 should be cautious with the
news
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 on social
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. On the other side, when
people
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 solely get
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 from social
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, they are no more socialising with their neighbourhood.
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, when an individual goes to a nearby shop to buy some newspapers, he meets his friends and chats with them on his way. Unfortunately, the business of newspapers is disappearing and all
people
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 employed in the printing business at a certain point will have no jobs. In conclusion, I am not in favour to get
news
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 on social
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 as the
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 is written by unprofessional
people
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 who write unreal
news
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 most of the time. On the other side, connecting with society is important, so
people
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 should go out and buy their newspapers.
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, the business of journalism and printing has been here for a decade and we should preserve these jobs.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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