A friend who is planning to visit you has asked you to describe the most interesting and enjoyable things to do in the community where you currently live. Write an email to your friend, telling them about these things. In your email: -Say what these things are -Say why they are interesting/enjoyable -Suggest what you can do together

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Dear Sam, I am so happy to hear from you.How are you and the kids doing?I received your letter asking me about some of the places you can

visit

when you

visit

my city.I am so delighted to share with you my experiences and would suggest you go to some of the most interesting places that you and the children can enjoy and spend some quality time together. Once you arrive at the airport after you check in at the hotel you can start your day by visiting the zoological park which is just a few minutes from the hotel.Children can see a variety of birds and animals and learn about their food and habitat.

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there is a carnival in the city which is a Disneyland theme where kids can get dressed in costumes of various characters.It will be a fun-filled evening with lots of activities and entertainment.

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I mentioned the above places for children there are a number of sight-seeing activities for adults too.You can

visit

the historical museum as I know you like art.

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museum there is a fountain show at night at the city's famous beach where live music is

also

being played. Before you end your trip you can

visit

my home where we can spend some time remembering our childhood memories.I would be happy to introduce you to my family and the kids can spend some time together. If you need any help do not hesitate to contact me.Hope to see you soon. Best wishes, Nida.

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secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

258 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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