A friend who is planning to visit you has asked you to describe the most interesting and enjoyable things to do in the community where you currently live. Write an email to your friend, telling them about these things. In your email: -Say what these things are -Say why they are interesting/enjoyable -Suggest what you can do together
Dear Sam,
I am so happy to hear from you.How are you and the kids doing?I received your letter asking me about some of the places you can
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my city.I am so delighted to share with you my experiences and would suggest you go to some of the most interesting places that you and the children can enjoy and spend some quality time together.
Once you arrive at the airport after you check in at the hotel you can start your day by visiting the zoological park which is just a few minutes from the hotel.Children can see a variety of birds and animals and learn about their food and habitat.Use synonyms
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there is a carnival in the city which is a Disneyland theme where kids can get dressed in costumes of various characters.It will be a fun-filled evening with lots of activities and entertainment.
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I mentioned the above places for children there are a number of sight-seeing activities for adults too.You can Remove the comma
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the historical museum as I know you like art.Use synonyms
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museum there is a fountain show at night at the city's famous beach where live music is Remove the comma
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Before you end your trip you can Linking Words
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my home where we can spend some time remembering our childhood memories.I would be happy to introduce you to my family and the kids can spend some time together.
If you need any help do not hesitate to contact me.Hope to see you soon.
Best wishes,
Nida.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite