In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge orr experience.
It is often perceived that the older generation most likely
spend
their time in a nursing Change the verb form
spends
house
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, Linking Words
in
some Change preposition
on
occassion
, Correct your spelling
occasion
occasions
Use synonyms
government
allocated their capital for Add an article
the government
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this
services. Correct determiner usage
these
This
essay will explain why Linking Words
family
need to be responsible in taking Fix the agreement mistake
families
care
of the elderly, including to finance the nursing Use synonyms
house
.
On Use synonyms
one
Use synonyms
hand
, the elderly Use synonyms
contributes
the least Change the verb form
contribute
for
the Change preposition
to
goverment
because they are already unproductive, making it difficult to prioritize the budget for Correct your spelling
government
this
generation. It Linking Words
it
worth considering that Correct your spelling
is
government
obtain Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
money
from their citizens through Use synonyms
tax
system, which required them to pay Correct article usage
a tax
the
annual tax Correct article usage
apply
according to
their Linking Words
wealths
and Change the wording
wealth
signs of wealth
incomes
. Fix the agreement mistake
income
This
is important because Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
money
has become sensitive Use synonyms
issues
as societies will try to scrutinize how Fix the agreement mistake
issue
Use synonyms
government
allocated the budget. Alternatively, the Correct article usage
the government
money
could be used for addressing more urgent cases Use synonyms
such
as giving Linking Words
aids
to the poor, building Fix the agreement mistake
aid
school
in remote areas, and providing access to clean water in underdeveloped regions. Fix the agreement mistake
schools
Consequently
, Linking Words
due to
limited source, Linking Words
Use synonyms
government
Correct article usage
the government
unable
to provide help for the elderly as the Add a missing verb
is unable
money
would be better off in the Use synonyms
hand
of more vulnerable actors.
Use synonyms
On the other
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hand
, Use synonyms
family
should be the Add an article
the family
a family
Use synonyms
one
who are fully obligated to watch their parents or grandparents. Correct pronoun usage
ones
This
is because they know the elderly more than the Linking Words
government
, which Use synonyms
lead
them to possess Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
moral
obligation to take Add an article
a moral
the moral
care
Use synonyms
their
family members. It Change preposition
of their
it
important to Correct your spelling
is
notes
that they live for so many years under the same roof, allowing them to build warm and meaningful relations. Wrong verb form
note
Additionally
, even if the older generation Linking Words
need
extra Change the verb form
needs
care
, at Use synonyms
one
point in their life they Use synonyms
also
did their duties to take Linking Words
care
of their child, which means that paying Use synonyms
nursing
Correct article usage
a nursing
house
acts as a tribute to payback. Use synonyms
As a result
, the Linking Words
money
from the family will be distributed as a gesture of kindness, as opposed to making it Use synonyms
pressure
or Correct article usage
a pressure
burden
. Assuming that family unable Correct article usage
a burden
have
limited budgets, I would argue that the children can go Fix the infinitive
to have
hand
in Use synonyms
hand
to collect the Use synonyms
money
to ease the process.
In conclusion, the Use synonyms
government
should not be the Use synonyms
one
who Use synonyms
help
the nursing Change the verb form
helps
house
for the elderly because they contributed the least. Use synonyms
Converserly
, I remain convinced that Correct your spelling
Conversely
family
should be obligated to finance their older family members Fix the agreement mistake
families
due to
moral responsibilities.Linking Words
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