Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The financial status of the country is a topic that has been widely discussed among many groups of people. Some specialists believe that there is no satisfaction for citizens if their countries are already wealthy.
However
, I would like to express my opinion Linking Words
that is
different from those experts. I believe that people can satisfy with the factors Linking Words
such
as quality of life, desirable dreams, and public facilities. In the following paragraphs, the reasons why I disagree will be proposed with examples.
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To begin
with, living in wealthy countries is beneficial for some reasons. Linking Words
Firstly
, more population will improve their quality of life if governments have good employees that can manage their work process. Linking Words
This
means that citizens can work or study without worrying about financial problems. Linking Words
Secondly
, local communities will have opportunities to present their traditional cultures which can attract foreign travellers to visit them. To illustrate, those local communities can have high salaries if they sell souvenirs and food, and they can use that money to support themselves, Linking Words
such
as travelling to desirable destinations. Linking Words
Lastly
, some companies might make investments in nations that have economic growth, and those nations can provide public facilities, Linking Words
such
as public transportation and public healthcare, using money from investments for their residents.
The factors stated above pave the way for my conclusion. In my opinion, if the management of the rich countries is good enough, circumstances Linking Words
such
as economic wealth can make their populations satisfy. Linking Words
However
, governments should care about the mental health and life expectancy of citizens rather than anything.Linking Words
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