You recently went to a concert and thought one of te singers was very good. You want to tell him hoe you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter - say how you feel about his performance -give details of your musical activities -explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

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Dear ZeenKyi, I am a student from the University of Yangon where you had given a show on the 3rd of April. I am writing

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letter to express my feeling and devotion to you and your art. I have been one of your huge fans and

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proud

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of your unique talented voice. First of all, the performance was full of excitement, dedication and joy. And your

music

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provided positive vibes and peace to the soul. Among them, my favourite was the

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music

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track of that day which was composed about your

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journey. Singing is my passion.

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studies, I am fond of learning instruments and

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. Currently, I am practising guitar and vocal lessons as part of my weekly schedule in order to take part in a solo competition hosted by “The Voice, Myanmar”. You are my idol who has set an example for me that we can achieve our dream with our determination.

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, I intend to

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my skill

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, I would like to request your slight attention in answering my queries regarding

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through emails so that I can achieve the heights in the contest. Looking forward to learning under your guidance. Yours Sincerely, Ella Khin

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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8 paragraphs

204 words

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