It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age.Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.

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essay is about learning between correct and incorrect in early age
children
and if
punishment
is necessary to help them
learning
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this
difference or not.
To begin
with,I disagree with
this
opinion because I believe that
children
(
specially
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under
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those under
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seven years old)
sholud
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should
live their life to the full.They should be free until they do not harm themselves or others.But we can teach them some tips
of
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life lessons in their words and in a way that they understand.Many psychologists believe that we must educate everything to
children
with indirect methods.
Therefore
parents and teachers ought to train good behaviour during playing.It will have
much
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better and
persistent
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effect. Coming next to the levels and kinds of
punishment
it can be said that we have two models: positive
punishment
and negative
punishment
. The first sort means giving
negative
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stimulus.
For
instance
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when a student speaks out of turn in the class teacher may blame her.The other type is famous
to
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negative
punishment
and it refers to taking
desirable
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stimulus.
According to
the previous example,
this
time the teacher will tell to the student to leave the classroom because of her wrongful manner.
Consequently
, as I told
before
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I totally oppose
with
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any kind of aggressive penalty
to
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children
.To have a healthy society we must breed
them
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everything with calmness.
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