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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age.Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction

#children #difference #right #age #punishment #distinction
These days we live in modern society so
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 should have
nobel
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noble
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 and it is important for children to gain the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to un bringing them. I will support
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i
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 can say that o strongly agree
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 the idea that
penalty
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 can help to learn them because the kid's brain could learn anything as soon as possible and they do not
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whyis
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what is
 right and what is wrong.
Overall
 parent responsibility
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 infants.
For
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while
 the child
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 abuse, the family must retribution their bad treatment. Punishing is better to include
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 one of the
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 of
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.
In the
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 second reason from my perspective is that the
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suggestion
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 to us that we have to seriously conduct
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bairn
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.
In
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 when children indicate good
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 from themselves is better we encourage and persuade them.
Therefore
 parents reading
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 and
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 psychologists about nurture. As an
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 they have
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learned
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 recommendation and now they are being done.
However
 family is one of the most important things in the world.
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 bringing is significant
then
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 many opinions and
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 about
this
 issue.
To sum up
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 prefer a polite baby with punishment than a rude baby
with out
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without
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 it.
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