You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Give details of your study plans Explain why you want to get a part-time job Suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Hi Noor, It has been ages since we

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spoke. I hope you and your family are doing okay. I wanted to let you know that I am moving to Georgia, USA for higher studies. I am glad that I will be closer to you and we can catch up on a lot of stuff. I got admission

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Masters in Project Manager, which is a 1-year programme. During

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tenure, I will have to attend evening classes on alternate days.

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, I will have ample time on my hand during the day. I want to spend

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time doing a part-time job which will boost my income

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help in getting some additional skills. Would it be possible for you to help me find a job? I would request you to please share some online links with job openings.

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, I would be profoundly indebted if you could refer me for some jobs. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Truly, Maha R.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

168 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Educational aspirations
Work experience
Financial independence
Resume (or CV)
Local job market
International student
Legal requirements
Student work permit
Employment trends
Time management
Networking
A part-time position
Balance studies and work
Job hunting strategies

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