The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the results of a survey about residents' drinking habits and consumption of
coffee
and tea in
Sydney
,
Melbourne
,
Brisbane
,
Adelaide
and
Hobart
in Australia in the
last
4
weeks
. It is manifest from the chart that individuals in
Sydney
,
Melbourne
and
Hobart
tend to visit a
coffee
shop in the
last
4
weeks
more often than
people
who live in
Brisbane
and
Adelaide
. Among them, the café gain the most popularity in
Melbourne
and the least popularity in
Adelaide
, with approximately 63% and 50% of
people
going to the café in the
last
4
weeks
respectively.
In addition
, the purchase rate of both instant and fresh
coffee
in
Sydney
,
Melbourne
and
Hobart
is
also
higher than that of the rest two countries.
Similarly
,
people
in
Brisbane
and
Adelaide
tend to buy less fresh
coffee
than the other three countries, with 35% in the
last
4
weeks
.
In contrast
, the crowd in these two places has a preference for purchasing instant
coffee
, with 53% and 50% respectively. The purchase of
coffee
in
Hobart
showed the same inclinations in these two countries, with almost 55% of
people
buying instant
coffee
and less than 40% of individuals buying fresh
coffee
.
Overall
,
people
in
Sydney
,
Melbourne
and
Hobart
showed a preference for
coffee
and tea more than
people
in
Brisbane
and
Adelaide
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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