As languages such as English, Spanish and Mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a fear that many minority languages may die out. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages. What is you view of this practice?

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Nowadays, all over the world, every

country

has its own official

language

. Among the countless number of different

languages

, the use of English, Spanish, and Mandarin seems to be more common, which causes fear of the disappearance of the remaining

minority

languages

. I think not only a group of countries but all of them have taken measures to prevent the extinction of

minority

languages

. I will discuss why in

this

essay.

Firstly

, every

language

is part of the

culture

of that

country

. Every civilization has got a long

history

even if they are in the

minority

groups

therefore

the

language

that is

spoken there has a

history

of the same age,

for

this

reason, neglecting a

minority

language

will destroy a piece of that ancient

history

For example

, Iran is considered the oldest civilization in the World, there are several

minority

languages

such

as Kurdish, and Azeri so, with the destruction of these

languages

, the value of Iran’s rich

history

will be reduced. A second factor is that different

languages

represent the belonging of each person to their own

country

. If everyone is supposed to speak the same

language

, there will be no difference between the

culture

, customs, and traditions of each nation and its population,

for instance

, the loss of a

country

’s

language

and

culture

makes no one interested in learning the different cultures of other societies. It might be said that speaking only three

languages

around the World has advantages and people can easily communicate with each other by going to different countries,

however

, with the progress of science, simple ways to speak different

languages

have been invented and there is no need for people to become monolingual.

To conclude

, the value of the

history

and

culture

of each

country

depends on its

language

; with the destruction of that, there Is no difference between different people and their rich

history

so, all the achievements that a civilization has achieved will be forgotten.

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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324 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Minority languages
Cultural heritage
Language revitalization
Bilingualism
Multilingualism
Cultural identity
Language preservation
Indigenous languages
Global diversity
Language courses
Language death
Worldviews
Cognitive benefits
Inclusive society
Economic opportunities

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