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Some people believe that children should not be given home work everyday, while others believe that they must get home work every day in order to be successful at school. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#people #children #home #work #school
A human can learn
lot
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 of things during the growing period of his
life
. A number of masses are arguing that
the
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young
minds
 do not need
a lessons
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lessons
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 to do after
a
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apply
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school
time
 on
regular
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a regular
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 basis
where
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 others
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in
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the
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favour of
keep
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 children busy in
study
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the study
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 even after
the
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school
 hours.
This
 essay will highlight the importance of studying after
school
 hours and
also
 shed light on
contrast
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 opinions.
To begin
 with, giving
a
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apply
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time
 to
study
 on
regular
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a regular
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 basis even after
instution
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institution
instruction
 hours can help a young mind in enormous ways.
Firstly
, It develops their skills in
study
 and
sharpen
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 their
minds
. What I mean by
this
 is that the more
time
 they will spend on
study
, the faster they will master their field of education. As a famous quote
elaborate
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" Practice makes perfect".
Secondly
, dedication to
study
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studying
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everyday
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every day
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 develops a skill of dedication in them. It will help them in their future and makes their future bright as dedication is
a
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 important tool in every professional field. On
other
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 hand, there is no deny to the fact that education is crucial but there is a
life
 beyond the
study
 which growing
minds
 should savour in their childhood. Children
likes
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like
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 to play and their guardians should let them play sports. Games are not only beneficial for their physic but
also
 helpful for their
minds
. In
enormous
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an enormous
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 number of studies, It has been found," the child who plays sports
also
perform
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good
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well
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 in his studies
compares
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 to kids who don't give any
time
 to games. To sum
this
 up, balance in
life
 should be taught to the
youngers
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younger
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 in their growing period.
This
 will help them to maintain their
school
life
along with
the
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their
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 social
life
.
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