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Fake news is becoming increasingly common in the era of social media. What problems will it cause to individuals and the society? Suggest some measures to deal with it.

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Over the
last
 decades, there
have
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 existed
abundance
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 number of wrong information on social
platfrom
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platforms
platform
. It is going to
result
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 some issues and in
this
 situation, it will have
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a negatively
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negatively
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 impact
to
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 people and
community
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. In
this
 essay, I will argue, some reasons and how these problems should eliminate. First of all, more and more people use several social media platforms where they have shared and learned
a
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plenty number of information.
In addition
, recently, most children have an account,
however
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 it has
huge
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 effect
to
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 them and they have
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 most of
fake
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news
 by watching a video or reading any kind of topic. Regarding that it has been investigated a lot of researches in
this
 case,
most
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 observers informed that all unreasonable
news
 directly
effect
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 human
heath
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health
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.
For example
, by giving bad
news
 about
an actors
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, it is going to influence their family members and fans.
By contrast
, sometimes are shared bad
news
 about a political person.
Secondly
, if the
goverment
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government
 should not find any solution
of
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this
 problem, it will grow in
a
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 wrong way.
Therefore
, it should be founded by police and have to arrest and
do
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not allow them
create
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new
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problem
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 which
have
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effecten
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affected
to
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 society and people.
To conclude
, in
a
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 contemporary world wrong
news
are
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seperated
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separated
 by huckers which influence badly to individuals, and so it must
be make
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 new law
due to
 not sharing any wrong one.
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