You are going on holiday to a city overseas where your friend lives. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter Write about your plans Request information where to stay Ask about the best places to visit

#holiday #city #friend #lives #plans #request #information #places #visit

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear Ahmed, How have you been?It's been a long since we

last

Linking Words

met each other. I'm writing

this

Linking Words

letter to let you know that I'm going to visit Toronto City on my upcoming holiday , and need to know some information from you.

Firstly

Linking Words

, I'll be arriving on Saturday 26th of June at 8 pm, and I'm making an accommodation for

this

Linking Words

night at Airport Hotel .

Moreover

Linking Words

, I'll stay two weeks in Toronto City in order to explore new places ,

as well as

Linking Words

, enjoy my hobbies.

Secondly

Linking Words

, I'd like to know the best hotels to stay on my vacation. It would be great if it is more cheap and comfortable .

Finally

Linking Words

, since you've moved to Toronto for two years, you certainly know the best places of interest. I'd be very happy if you could show me around to explore and find out about These sites. Thanks in advance , and it sounds great to hear from you. Warm wishes, Mohammed

Submitted by mohammedgameil119 on Wed Apr 26 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

164 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

<4
band
22.Some people think that with the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, people lose the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Tecnology is one of the imprtant things nowadays. Manay people use phones and computers to communicate with people in far distens.I strongly agree that mobile phones and computer help to lose the ability to communicate face to face .
7.5
band
We no longer need to have animals kept in zoos, so zoos should be closed. Do you agree or disagree?
It is said that some people believe that should not keep animals in zoos anymore. I completely disagree mainly due to some conservational programs.
6.5
band
Some people regard eating meat as completely wrong. To what extent do you agree?
Vegetarian diets have become very popular as a lifestyle choice in recent years. I personally believe there are several arguments in favour of vegetarianism: health issues, the ethical/religious argument and environmental factors.
6
band
Some believe that it is a natural process for animal species to become extinct and therefore, there is no reason to try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?
There are many reasons that lead to animal extinction.Although, archeology has proven
7
band
As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes. Why does this happen? How does this affect society?
Many countries around the world are becoming richer as they develop and at the same time these countries are seeing a reduction in the size of the family unit. This essay will discuss the reasons for this phenomenon and examine some of the possible effects it will have on society.

You are going on holiday to a city overseas where your friend lives. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter Write about your plans Request information where to stay Ask about the best places to visit

22.Some people think that with the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, people lose the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

We no longer need to have animals kept in zoos, so zoos should be closed. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people regard eating meat as completely wrong. To what extent do you agree?

Some believe that it is a natural process for animal species to become extinct and therefore, there is no reason to try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?

As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes. Why does this happen? How does this affect society?