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The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie chart illustrates what work graduates of anthropology
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 a particular University after obtaining their
first degree
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 certificate.
While
 the table gives information on the
range
 of salaries of
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anthropologists
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 in service for
5years
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5 years
.
Overall
,we can deduce from the pie chart that more than half of the
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anthropologists
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 work as
full-time
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a full-time
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job
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jobs
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and
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while
 the least of the graduates combine work and study. We can
also
 see from the table that the
highest paid
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 employers were the government workers and
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lowest paid
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 are those in the private sector.
To begin
 with, we could see from the pie chart that
majority
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 (52%) of
the
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graduate Anthropologist are full-time
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employees
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, followed by
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a quarter
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 of graduates (15%) working part-time jobs.
Furthermore
,12% of
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 experts are jobless and 8% are into conventional postgraduate study and those studying combine with
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 study have the least proportion of 5%. Moving forward to the table, the data shows that the salary
range
 varies from one sector to the other.Private employees had the highest proportion of
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income($25000-40000) and the other two
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 with the same ratio of 5%.
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 for the salary
range
($50000-74999) with
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 sector having
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 in
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Moreover
, freelance consultants had the highest fraction
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(40%) in
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a salary
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 of ($75000-99999) and
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government workers
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 the
overall
 percentage(50,%) in people earning over $100000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words range with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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