Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.* *Discuss both views and give your opinion.*

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people

believed that advertising is extremely effective at convincing others to patronize things. Most

personperceived

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person perceived

that advertising is outdated and we don't pay much attention to it.In my own

opinion

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I strongly agree. Advertising has been helpful in so many ways, in sinking an idea into the consumers' subconscious mind to purchase

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merchandise, creating awareness of certain commodities ,and

also

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the importance of getting the

commodity

,thereby creating job opportunities and generating revenue . It's already trending globally in the world,everything denotes sales marketing and desired satisfaction from a

commodity

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have a friend in the health sector whose job description was to give adult immunisation, for the fact that he vaccinates individuals doesn't limit him to advertise ,he health educate them about the vaccine's effectiveness and imperative of being vaccinated.all

this

process will not only yield health promotion or prevention of diseases but will appraise profit making for the organizations.

On the contrary

,most

people

perceived that advertising is outdated and we don't pay much attention to it. Truly, considering the fact that too most

people

are already in the bid of doing sales marketing in all sectors. Makes it tiring for

people

to get genuine goods. Because there is a tendency of purchasing a fake

commodity

as much , every person

want

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to advertise their

commodity

but making profits is aimed , so they are not bothered about customers satisfaction. Thereby making the individuals fall victim to acquiring the wrong goods and services and making individuals uninterested . In conclusion, it's argued that advertisements have a role in sinking ideas of the subconscious mind of every person to purchase goods but too many

person

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had made it uninteresting to get

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desired utility from

such

services.