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The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress . To what extent do you agree or disagree. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples form your own knowledge or experience.

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The most irrelevant purpose of
music
 to
individuals
 is helping in decreasing Apprehensiveness caused by our daily
activities
.
To begin
,
stress
 is exhibited by our body when it is exhausted either physically from daily
activities
 and
work
, emotionally,
mentally
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or mentally
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, and people have different coping mechanisms to
stress
 in
the
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apply
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likes
of
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as
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 drinking water, sleeping , watching tv and equally listening to
music
. Listening to
music
 has a greater part in
stress
 reduction it has been found to be very helpful to
individuals
 who experience tension
as a result
 of
work
.
Music
 comes in different forms
in
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the likes of hip hop, jazz, worship songs and
fugii
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fungi
fugit
.
Music
 has helped me a lot to cope with
stress
 after my daily
activities
 and coming back
fro
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from
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work
 sometimes I feel so exhausted when I listened to
music
 I feel elated and renewed
..
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.
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Furthermore
,
music
 has helped
individuals
 when they are emotionally stressed out, most especially in the likes of worship songs, bringing back the mood of
such
individuals
, I remember a day I returned from
work
 after a long day with a busy shift
coupled with
 I lost my money and I was extremely down and stressed after listening to
a particular worship songs
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particular worship songs
a particular worship song
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 I regained myself and my lost energy and I was able to prepare for
work
 the following day. In conclusion,
music
 has been helpful in the reduction of
stress
,a lot of
individuals
has
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have
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 been able to cope with
stress
 and continue with their daily
activities
.
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