The most important function of music that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Task 2
It has been realised that the fundamental use of
music
is its ability in reducing people's stress
. Music
is one
of the oldest phenomena in the history of man. Lots of investigations over the years concerning this
topic and one
of the vital benefits is that it has been observed to lower stress
. I agree with this
opinion because when an individual listens to music
, the lyrics in the song can divert one
's attention and also
playing the instruments relaxed the nerves. In this
essay, I agree that music
reduces stress
with the help of relevant examples and a logical conclusion.
When listening to music
, the lyrics in the song have a way of casting people's minds to something else either in the abstract. For ,example people listen to love songs, the lyrics according to
some individuals make you remember when you first loved or you could remember when you first met that special person that brings a smile to your face and distract your mind from the stressor at that point in time. Furthermore
, listening to music
calms the nerves, relaxes the muscles and reduces stress
. In recent years, research has shown that one
of the ways of counteracting stress
is by listening to music
through vocals or instruments. Although
, in some ,cases music
can rather become a stressor instead
of a stress
antagonist. For example
in some parts of Nigeria where the best way of listening to music
is by tuning the volume to be very. This
of course disturbs the peace of the mind and the serenity of the environment.
In conclusion, music
is a very important option for managing stress
but it can also
be a major factor of stress
when it is wrongly used.Submitted by oludayotemilade on
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