There has been a dramatic growth in the number of people studying at universities in the last few decades. While some people see this as a positive trend which raises the general level of education within the community, others fear that it is lowering the quality of education. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the increase in student numbers at university?

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than ever before.

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argue that the

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of

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in universities

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a negative impact on

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.

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essay will talk about

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and advantages of universities.

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is very important in life, some

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believe that many

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institution are not

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a good influence on

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, there are many

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in the same class and only

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teacher may not be able to cope with his work, thereby it will be bad to explain and the

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will not be able to

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normally.

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,

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, it is necessary that a decent

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of

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at the educational institution It is often said that

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is the best legacy

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can have.

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of the major gains of increasing numbers of

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studying in universities is

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of knowledge.

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is so because when

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is knowledgeable, the skills acquired can be translated to making significant developments in the areas of

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of the individual which can be beneficial to the immediate community and the nation at large.

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and can work, in the future

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life ever in conclusion, training has a large part of the positive effect, but still sometimes the

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is large and

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becomes worse, it is worth reducing the

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of

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in an educational institution.

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, the inadequate facilities to accommodate the growing numbers of undergraduates could impair the quality of knowledge gained.