In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The old generation will require special

care

following their

retirements

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, in England, they usually spend time in a

retirement

village with

nurse

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a nurse

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available to take

care

of them. I believe that

instead

of putting the burden entirely

to

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families

or the

government

, both parties should take their

parts

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in financing the costs for the elderly. On the one hand,

government

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need to take

care

of their older demographics

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two reasons.

Firstly

, the elderly paid taxes for more than 40 years, which means that they deserve something in return for their investment, including decent facilities in their

retirement

age. To illustrate, a

retire

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public servant in his late 60

spare

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their annual

salaries

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for the

government

though

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a tax system, which means that he contributed to the state development budgets for decades.

Therefore

, the

government

need to strategically plan the budgets to fund the nurse which will be responsible

in

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giving extra

care

for

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the elderly.

Secondly

, nursing

house

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tend to be expensive and it might put a burden

for

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families

with

low-income

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low income

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.

For example

, if the family members are unable to afford

retirement

care

, their old relatives might suffer to get an ideal treatment in their late age.

Consequently

, the

government

must create subsidies and

focusing

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the budget

to

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those struggling financially.

On the other hand

, I would argue that some

families

are wealthy enough,

thus

they can easily spare money for

retirement

services. In fact, for high-income society, not only they can fund their parents or grandparents

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they can

also

choose

for

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a private nursing house with luxury services and well-trained

nurse

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.

As a result

, it will increase satisfaction levels for the

families

as they can send their parents to the most advanced

retirement

villages.

This

means that rich

families

can survive without the

government

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help, allowing the

government

to focus on low-income members. In conclusion, the

government

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duties are to provide

care

for the elderly because they pay taxes for years.

However

, I remain convinced that case-to-case situation should be considered and the

government

need to

allocated

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the budgets for poor

families

.