In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The old generation will require special

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following their

retirements

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retirement

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, in England, they usually spend time in a

retirement

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village with

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a nurse

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available to take

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of them. I believe that

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of putting the burden entirely

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on

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families

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or the

government

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, both parties should take their

parts

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in financing the costs for the elderly. On the one hand,

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government

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the government

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need to take

care

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of their older demographics

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two reasons.

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, the elderly paid taxes for more than 40 years, which means that they deserve something in return for their investment, including decent facilities in their

retirement

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age. To illustrate, a

retire

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public servant in his late 60

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their annual

salaries

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for the

government

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though

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a tax system, which means that he contributed to the state development budgets for decades.

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, the

government

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need to strategically plan the budgets to fund the nurse which will be responsible

in

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giving extra

care

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for

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the elderly.

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, nursing

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houses

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tend to be expensive and it might put a burden

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on

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families

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with

low-income

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low income

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.

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, if the family members are unable to afford

retirement

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care

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, their old relatives might suffer to get an ideal treatment in their late age.

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, the

government

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must create subsidies and

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the budget

to

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those struggling financially.

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, I would argue that some

families

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are wealthy enough,

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they can easily spare money for

retirement

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services. In fact, for high-income society, not only they can fund their parents or grandparents

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they can

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choose

for

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a private nursing house with luxury services and well-trained

nurse

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nurses

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.

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, it will increase satisfaction levels for the

families

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as they can send their parents to the most advanced

retirement

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villages.

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means that rich

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can survive without the

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government

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help, allowing the

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to focus on low-income members. In conclusion, the

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government

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duties are to provide

care

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for the elderly because they pay taxes for years.

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, I remain convinced that case-to-case situation should be considered and the

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need to

allocated

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the budgets for poor

families

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.