The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010.

The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010.
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The bar charts provided information on the proportion of the people in the UK that consumed fruit and vegetables every day in 2002,2006 and 2010.
Overall
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, it can seem that women were the highest total for eating food and vegetables. Followed by men and kids respectively.
Firstly
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, in the year 2006, people very enjoyed having fruit and vegetable more than in 2002 and 2006. The percentage in 2006 was 76 per
cent
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In contrast
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, the percentage declined in 2010 was 62 per
cent
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.
In addition
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, in 2002 the proportion in the UK was very lowest and lower than in another year was 51 per
cent
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Moreover
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, the charts give the percentage that women enjoy eating food and vegetable
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every year and the highest total in 2006 was 32 per
cent
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for people who love fruit and vegetables.
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