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The job market today is very competitive and it is best to choose a career or field of study early in order to get a good job later in life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#job #market #career #field #study #life
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Nowadays , consumerism covers our planet .
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, many jobs depend on the sales
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goods
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 . many economists hold the view that marketing as a job is the most important way to achieve success in life . I believe that
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 income in
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 in online marketing as another way to improve financial status.
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 with, after the industrial revolution world changed into a big market because production has been soaring to a high level and the
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 of
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 increased so many artificial aspects established a new department to sell these products .
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, many owners needed to help experienced marketing men to increase the level of financial resources .
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 , the division of marketing becomes an essential part of any commercial
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 .
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 ,Pepsi
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 achieved higher income and destroyed Coca-Cola
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 by establishing a new department for advertisement and marketing .
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 , what can be said is that not only
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 in a marketing career the best job for many youths, but it is
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 the best way for any financial division to achieve success.
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, the world achieve a mutation in information and communication and the transport of characteristics of new products become so easy by social media or internet websites. To illustrate , most products spread around the world immediately appear and
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 is
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 online marketing . Many youths nowadays
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 as freelancers selling different
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 and they achieve a high income from
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work
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 .
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 , social media and electronic apps are the most factors for increasing the vitality of marketing jobs. In conclusion ,
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 essay has manifested the points mentioned above it can be reiterated that selling
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 as a job is a vital factor to achieve a high salary in any
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 or institution.
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