The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009

The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009
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The diagram illustrates how many
houses
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were constructed per year in two different cities: Derby and Nottingham over a nearly 10-year period, starting in 2000.
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, it is immediately observed that both cities saw an upward trend in the
number
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of
houses
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built.
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, at the beginning of the period, more
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were built in Derby than in Nottingham,
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by the end, the opposite shown is true. On the one hand, from 2000 to 2001, the
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of newly built homes in Derby was around 50.
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figure rose steadily to about 125 homes in the next 3 years,
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remained unchanged till 2007.
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after that, the
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of
houses
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built significantly increased in 2008 and 2009, accounting for 275
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and 350
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respectively.
On the other hand
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, Nottingham City followed a rather different pattern. Between 2000 and 20005, the
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of new homes fluctuated around 50
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before dropping to almost 0 in 2006. A remarkable increase of about approximately 200 in 2007.
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figure have come to 0 once in 2008;
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, it was an incredible increase to 250 new
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built in 2009.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words houses, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • number of houses built
  • per year
  • cities
  • Derby
  • Nottingham
  • between
  • comparison
  • 10-year period
  • year-wise
  • analyze
  • compare
  • total
  • over
  • closing statement
  • introduction
  • overview
  • summarize
  • main points
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