The chart shows Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the Anthropologists in work after five years

The chart shows Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the Anthropologists in work after five years
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after finishing their undergraduate degree course.
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the
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anthropology
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in
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work
after five years.
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of
graduates
are doing full -
time
was by least amount of gadgets doing part -0time
work
with postgraduate study.
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sector is high. Ask can
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from the chat, 52
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graduate
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are doing
full -
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job
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. 12
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and 15 % of
graduates
are unemployed and doing
part-
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time
work
respectively. 18% of
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doing
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time
postgraduate study.
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, 5% are doing
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work
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8% is have As can
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from the table, 5
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of Reliance Council and garment sector get $ 25,000-49000 amount as
salary
after 5 years of
work
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 91%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, graduates, salary, work, time with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • anthropology graduates
  • undergraduate degree
  • part-time work
  • full-time work
  • postgraduate study
  • unemployment
  • career trends
  • employment opportunities
  • flexibility
  • specialization
  • competitive job market
  • salary
  • earning potential
  • private sector
  • government sector
  • freelance work
  • public policy
  • cultural preservation
  • consulting
  • corporate anthropology
  • expertise
  • accrued
  • distribution
  • sector
  • trend
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