The chart shows Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the Anthropologists in work after five years

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of anthropology

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after finishing their undergraduate degree course.

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from the chat, 52

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and 15 % of

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are unemployed and doing

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respectively. 18% of

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postgraduate study.

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from the table, 5

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of Reliance Council and garment sector get $ 25,000-49000 amount as

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after 5 years of

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is 5% is more than

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