Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions.

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Whether maintaining public
libraries
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is a waste of money is a topic of discussion. The given topic
inform
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that
computer
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technology can replace the functions of
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. In the following paragraphs, the reason why I disagree with
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idea will be explained. From the views of
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who agree with
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topic, it is
waste
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of money, because
libraries
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need
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to
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, and
libraries
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have to pay
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to them. On top of that,
computer
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technology can replace
libraries
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’ functions. To illustrate,
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computer
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computers
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can store
information
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more than
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, and many books have an
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version, so
people
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can read them through the internet.
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, using
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is saving time.
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means that
information
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can be searched anywhere.  
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, other
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, including me, agree that maintaining public
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is important.
Libraries
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are accessible
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anyone.
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, old
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, someone who can’t afford
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computer
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, and someone who
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in
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internet can’t access.
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,
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from
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is more reliable than
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computers
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.
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because
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information
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on the internet can be written by anyone, different from
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a book
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, which is going through many
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research
to complete.
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, the atmosphere of
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is better than other places. Neither home nor bedroom is a good place to read a book, it is not effective enough.  In conclusion, both of the views inform the different
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.
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, the reason why I disagree with the idea
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I believe that public
libraries
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should be maintained. Even though it costs
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of money to
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, it is necessary and important for many
people
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.
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