One of your penfriends wants to improve their English at a language school. They have never studied at a language school before and have asked for your advice on how to choose a good one. write a letter to your penfriend, Advise them about the following; the teaching method,the number of students in class and the number of hours per week. write 150 words in 20 minutes.

Dear Lucy, I am glad that you asked me for advice about
study
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English at a language school. As I have studied English
at
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a language before, my advices are from my personal experience. I would recommend you do more research about the teaching method, the number of students in
class
and the number of hours per week. About
teaching
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method, you can do more research
about
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student's
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feedback for the teaching method.
Also
, you can request to attend a trial
class
before you enrol in the course.
Also
, it is better to choose a small
class
rather than
big
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class
, because if there is only one teacher in the
class
, the teacher can answer each student's question when it
is
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a small
class
.
However
, it is
big
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class
,
you
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will not be able to get answers from the teacher, because there is
time
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a time
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limit for each
class
,
such
as 40 minutes per
class
. The more hours you
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the
class
, you will learn more
while
in the school,
such
as you can speak English with your classmates and schoolmates. Kind regards, Linda Lin
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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