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The table shows the percentage of journeys made by different forms of transport in four countries, The bar graph shows the results of a survey into car use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table provided information on five different ways citizens used to commute in four nations (
USA
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, the UK, France and the Netherlands). In conjunction with
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 result, the bar graph illustrated the studied data
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 the reason why many Americans use cars to go to their work. At a glance, it is noticeable that in all four countries, journeys are made by car the most in comparison to travelling by bicycle, using public transport, on foot or some other way.
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 surveyed that in the USA , the reason why cars were used to travel is
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 the fact that other alternatives were not available. Another striking point noted was that
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 travelling by bicycle in the other three countries remained almost the lowest, in the Netherlands, it was the second most chosen way to commute. Going into more detail, in the USA , 90 per
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 of the travellers used motor vehicles for work. Several reasons supported these statistics. It has been cited that almost 40 per
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 of the time there were no other choices, and another 30 per
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 commented that
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 is a necessity for work purposes. The remaining factors that contributed with less than twenty per
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 respectively were that it was convenient and quicker or working for night duties. Public transport in two European nations of the UK and France stood out as the second most utilized method to get around places with 12 per
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 and 18 per
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 .
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,the Dutch bike around representing slightly more than a quarter, 26 per
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 of all commuters.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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