Last year you met someone on holiday and became friends. He/she has informed you that he/she will be travelling near your hometown on business in a few months’ time. Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to stay with you. In your letter, •express how pleased you are to hear from him/her •invite him/her to stay with you •tell him/her about your ideas of how you could spend some time together

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Dear John, How are you? Hope you and your family are doing great. I am elated to know that you are planning to visit Dubai in a couple of weeks and I have already planned plenty of activities for us. It would be even better than our time spent

last

year in Thailand, where we met for the first time. Even though it was our first interaction but still we had a great time. Those memories will be cherished forever. Where are you staying in Dubai? You are most welcome to stay with me in my home. I have a beautiful guest room that will be all yours during your stay.

Also

, the timing for your visit is perfect. The weather is pleasant and the event 'Global Village' has just started. It has cultural displays from over 100 countries and

also

numerous entertainment opportunities. It will be a mammoth pleasant experience for us to attend it together. I am sure you will enjoy it to the fullest. I am desperately waiting for your arrival. Looking forward to hearing from you. Pass on my love and regards to Jenny and the kids. Yours truly Carol J

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

195 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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