There have been some problems with the bus servicing, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company, in your letter: Describe what the problems are Explain how these problems are affecting you Suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring your attention
some
problems with the Change preposition
to some
bus
servicing, Use synonyms
for example
, reliability, in my area for the Linking Words
last
two weeks. My name is Milav and I live in Sector Number 2A.
To commence with, the people from my area and I have been suffering a couple of problems with your Linking Words
bus
servicing. Use synonyms
Firstly
, for the Linking Words
last
couple of weeks, buses did not arrive regularly in our area during office time. Linking Words
Secondly
, if by chance they Linking Words
came
arrive on time, Add the particle
tocame
then
Linking Words
Use synonyms
bus
conductors are behaving very rudely to us and they are not giving Correct article usage
the bus
change
Correct pronoun usage
us change
of
money to us.
Change preposition
apply
Due to
these services, we all are facing a number of problems. First of all, we all are reaching late at our company and we tend to seat late in the office to complete our office hours. Linking Words
Consequently
, we do not spend much time with our family. Another problem is that sometimes we lost our Linking Words
change
and are Correct your spelling
chance
in
Change preposition
at
loss
in money.
I would like to request you to change Add an article
a loss
the loss
bus
conductors as soon as possible and update your Use synonyms
bus
service as per modern technologyUse synonyms
,
so that we Remove the comma
apply
always
reliable in your services.
I hope you understand our concerns and look Add a missing verb
are always
at
into the matter. I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Milav SoniChange preposition
apply
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite