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Nowadays modern gadgets are widely used by young people and the use of these products reduces their creativity. Do you agree or disagree?

#gadgets #people #products #creativity
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current
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 scenario, contemporary
gadgets
 are Widely used by
youth
 and
use
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the use
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 of these items makes their ability
of
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to
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 creativity
more
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weak. As far as I am concerned I
am agree
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 with
this
 notion. To commence with,in
this
 modern era technology become an important part of our daily life. That's why our youngsters are more
impress
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by
these
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this kind
these kinds
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kind
 of technical
gadgets
 as
this
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these kinds
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kind
 of modern instruments
are
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 useful for our daily routine but it
also
 makes our
youth
 lazy. To explain it,
Now a days
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Nowadays
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 in our
work places
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workplaces
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 and home tasks everything
is now bases
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is now based
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 on technology
gadgets
however
 our juveniles use computers and mobiles for their work and study but on the
others
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 hand, whenever they have free
time
 they spend it on mobile and computer
while
 playing online games.
These
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This kind
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kind
 of activities reduce their creativity.
For example
, if
youth
 spend their
time
 in making painting and other kine of mind using activities they will be more creative.
On the other hand
,
although
this
kind
 of
gadgets
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gadget
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enhance
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 our knowledge but it
also
demolish
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demolishes
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 our creativity.to elaborate
it
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,if we spend our most of
time
 is social and creative things we can be more intelligent and with our creative abilities we can make
this
 world a more accurate place to live. Our
youth
 can participate in the progress of our coming nation.
For instance
, our ancestors were not having
this
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these kinds
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kind
 of
gadgets
 t and they spend their most of
time
 on creative things like painting, writing etc.
Hence
,
although
 technology become a crucial part of our life
but
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our juvenile should spend their most of
time
 in creative things except
of
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 using
this
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these kinds
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kind
 of
gadgets
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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