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Goverments should make people responsible for looking after their own local environment. Do you agree or disagree?

#goverments #people #environment
The damage being caused to our
enviornment
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environment
 is drastically increasing over the
last
years
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, and it is being talked about
in
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 various platforms, but it seems that nothing is progressing towards an improvement. One solution for
this
 issue
,
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 is if
governments
 will force
people
 to be in charge
for
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 their environment. In
this
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 I will explain why I strongly believe, that
this
 solution, outstands all other solutions, and will probably have a greater impact. Applying laws that will deter
people
 from
distorying
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destroying
distorting
 their
enviornment
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environment
, and
thus
, can cause them to be more aware
to
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 their actions and protect their
enviornment
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environment
, is a tool with a great effect. Enforcing
people
 to follow the rules usually results
with
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 positive outcomes.
For instance
, In Australia, there are fines for
people
 who
doesn’t
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 recycle their rubbish
,
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 or
doesn’t
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 chop their grass. Unlike other countries, there, most
people
 are
obbeying
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obeying
lobbying
such
 rules, and those who do not
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 will be fined with the amount of 5,000$.If
governments
 will follow Australia as an example, and declare
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punishments
such
 as fines or even sitting in jail for
enviormental
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environmental
 penalties, maybe
this
 will have a deeper effect on
people
 who will be more respectful and responsible towards where they live.
Additionally
, in my opinion,
governments
 can unite globally with other
governments
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 and implements
enviornmental
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environmental
 rules
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 a large scale, that will enforce a vast population to take
respobibility
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responsibility
 towards the
enviornment
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environment
, and by that, create an enormous impact on the entire world, rather than individuals, or small groups organizations, that try to make a change, but
unfortunately
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this
 change is small and locally. Undoubtedly, without applying force, and punishments, the individual will not be able to create a change that will matter. In conclusion,
Enviornment
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Environmental
Environment
 destruction happens all over the world, and
i
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 believe that
this
 should be issued globally. I agree that together,
governments
 can create a joint effort to fight
this
 phenomenon, and hopefully, to help our world to become a better place again.
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