Some people say that noise made by people should be strictly controlled while others say they should be free to make noise without limitation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There has been much policy
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advocacy
related to
noises
created by individuals.It is often argued by many
people
that
such
voices should be banned as it leads to air pollution. Meanwhile, others argue that
such
noises
bring no
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deleterious
harm to the community and
hence
should be allowed freely.
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the one hand, the
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supporters
of the
veiw
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view
state that excessive
noises
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in every venue
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being
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one of the
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environmental
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catastrophes
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. As
people
face
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hindrances
in searching for mental peace, resulting in mental health issues.
For example
, noise caused by
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zebra-crossing work produces some serious disturbances to the elderly
people
sleeping during the time of the day.
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, futile
noises
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no positive value to the society.
While
on the other hand
, the advocates of the idea
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that
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is a natural
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of human
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existence
.
Moreover
,
such
noises
if banned
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would
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compromise
comprise
the right to live independently in a free country.
For instance
,
lound
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loud
noises
coming out of the Opera
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theatre
is a subject of need and we can not forcefully stop the music just by
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merely
labelling it as a root of pollution.
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is essential in some form of nature and
people
should be
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handling them. In conclusion,
although
it is a common thought that
noises
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is certainly inconvenient. I believe,
while
extra loud
noises
can be distressing at times but some
noises
are just a demand of the work. Personally, I think those meaningless
noises
like car horns and firecrackers should be heavily finned and should not be
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practically
permissable
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permissible
in a community.
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