Some people believe that in order to improve educational quality, we should encourage students to make comments or even criticism on their teachers, but others think it will lead to the loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, the issue of education has been brought to the public attention. Some groups reckon that
teachers
might be advocated through
comments
or
criticism
by adolescents to enhance educational
quality
.
While
another group believe that it causes
students
admiration
and discipline for
teachers
might be reduced.
This
essay will discuss these issues and underpin
this
essay with relevant examples. On the one hand, there is no doubt that some
people
believe that educational
quality
might be picked up by adolescents’
comments
or
criticism
of their
professor
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professors
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. Because an individual opinion which is
negatively
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or
positively
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positive
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on the person might be indispensable to
develop
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that person.
Furthermore
, good
comments
from
students
may have a positive effect on the teacher’s minds. It will be made
people
a better person.
For example
, most universities in Korea
implements
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CQI(Continuous
Quality
Improvement) to improve courses’ academic
quality
from
students
' suggestions.
Hence
, it is important that
students
have their thinking of
teachers
individually for improving educational
quality
.
On the other hand
, there is no doubt that other
people
think that if
students
criticize their
teachers
indiscriminately, It will cause a loss of
admiration
and
rule
for
teachers
in the lecture room. Because young
people
sometimes cannot distinguish between constructive
criticism
and destructive condemnation. It can lead to the fall of respect and school
rule
.
Furthermore
, fun-loving
criticism
has a pernicious effect on
teacher’s
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teachers’
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admiration
and control. To exemplify,
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report
people
are using
this
power to overcome boredom and frustration.
Hence
, it is important that young
people
if adolescents criticize their mento indiscriminately, It causes
damage
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the damage
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of
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admire
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and
rule
for
professor
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professors
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. In conclusion, some
people
believe that educational
quality
might be picked up by adolescents’
comments
or
criticism
of their
professor
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professors
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.
while
other
people
reckon that if
students
criticize their
teachers
indiscriminately, It will cause a loss of
admiration
and
rule
for
teachers
in the lecture room.
Nevertheless
, freedom of talking of view for
teachers
has an influence on educational
quality
. So, I believe that suggestions of positive
criticism
and
comments
might create a better classroom atmosphere.
Submitted by isacckira on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational quality
  • encourage
  • comments
  • criticism
  • respect
  • discipline
  • feedback
  • teaching methods
  • democratic
  • interactive learning environment
  • vulnerable
  • job satisfaction
  • authority
  • constructive feedback
  • positive outcomes
  • productive dialogue
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