Some people believe that in order to improve educational quality, we should encourage students to make comments or even criticism on their teachers, but others think it will lead to the loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, the issue of education has been brought to the public attention. Some groups reckon that report
teachers
might be advocated through comments
or criticism
by adolescents to enhance educational quality
. While
another group believe that it causes students
’ admiration
and discipline for teachers
might be reduced. This
essay will discuss these issues and underpin this
essay with relevant examples.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that some people
believe that educational quality
might be picked up by adolescents’ comments
or criticism
of their professor
. Because an individual opinion which is Fix the agreement mistake
professors
negatively
or Change the word
negative
positively
on the person might be indispensable to Change the word
positive
develop
that person. Wrong verb form
developing
Furthermore
, good comments
from students
may have a positive effect on the teacher’s minds. It will be made people
a better person. For example
, most universities in Korea implements
CQI(Continuous Change the verb form
implement
Quality
Improvement) to improve courses’ academic quality
from students
' suggestions. Hence
, it is important that students
have their thinking of teachers
individually for improving educational quality
.
On the other hand
, there is no doubt that other people
think that if students
criticize their teachers
indiscriminately, It will cause a loss of admiration
and rule
for teachers
in the lecture room. Because young people
sometimes cannot distinguish between constructive criticism
and destructive condemnation. It can lead to the fall of respect and school rule
. Furthermore
, fun-loving criticism
has a pernicious effect on teacher’s
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teachers’
admiration
and control. To exemplify, according to
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the
people
are using this
power to overcome boredom and frustration. Hence
, it is important that young people
if adolescents criticize their mento indiscriminately, It causes damage
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the damage
of
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to
admire
and Replace the word
admiration
rule
for professor
.
In conclusion, some Fix the agreement mistake
professors
people
believe that educational quality
might be picked up by adolescents’ comments
or criticism
of their professor
. Fix the agreement mistake
professors
while
other people
reckon that if students
criticize their teachers
indiscriminately, It will cause a loss of admiration
and rule
for teachers
in the lecture room. Nevertheless
, freedom of talking of view for teachers
has an influence on educational quality
. So, I believe that suggestions of positive criticism
and comments
might create a better classroom atmosphere.Submitted by isacckira on
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