Some people believe that in order to improve educational quality, we should encourage students to make comments or even criticism on their teachers, but others think it will lead to the loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, the issue of education has been brought to the public attention. Some groups reckon that

teachers

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might be advocated through

comments

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or

criticism

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by adolescents to enhance educational

quality

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another group believe that it causes

students

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’

admiration

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and discipline for

teachers

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might be reduced.

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essay with relevant examples. On the one hand, there is no doubt that some

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believe that educational

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might be picked up by adolescents’

comments

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or

criticism

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of their

professor

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. Because an individual opinion which is

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or

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on the person might be indispensable to

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that person.

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, good

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from

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may have a positive effect on the teacher’s minds. It will be made

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a better person.

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CQI(Continuous

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Improvement) to improve courses’ academic

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from

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' suggestions.

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, it is important that

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have their thinking of

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individually for improving educational

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.

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, there is no doubt that other

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think that if

students

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criticize their

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indiscriminately, It will cause a loss of

admiration

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and

rule

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for

teachers

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in the lecture room. Because young

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sometimes cannot distinguish between constructive

criticism

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and destructive condemnation. It can lead to the fall of respect and school

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.

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, fun-loving

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has a pernicious effect on

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admiration

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and control. To exemplify,

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are using

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power to overcome boredom and frustration.

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, it is important that young

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if adolescents criticize their mento indiscriminately, It causes

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and

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for

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. In conclusion, some

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believe that educational

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might be picked up by adolescents’

comments

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or

criticism

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of their

professor

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other

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reckon that if

students

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criticize their

teachers

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indiscriminately, It will cause a loss of

admiration

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and

rule

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for

teachers

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in the lecture room.

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, freedom of talking of view for

teachers

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has an influence on educational

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. So, I believe that suggestions of positive

criticism

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and

comments

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might create a better classroom atmosphere.