You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level.

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Dear Sir, I recently came across a brochure in relation to the one-week walking

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in the mountains, which your company is organising. I have a passion towards nature photography and am interested in joining the

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to capture some pictures for my exhibition next month.

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, please provide details on the itinerary of the

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and

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on how the transportation is being organised to reach the mountains.

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, please share the prices of the available packages and share details if there are discounts available as well.

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, I have some concerns related to my fitness level. I was affected by dengue a few months back and I haven't recovered completely. I am still on treatment and do not engage in any intensive exercises. Given my health condition is it advisable to participate in the

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? If so, please do share some precautionary measures that I have to consider. Looking forward to hearing from you. Thanks & Regards, Dhinushika.

dhinushika_mThu Apr 27 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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161 words

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