Should government be responsible for what is to be taught in schools Give your opinion with relevant examples

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makes a
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society
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intellectually
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essay, I will draw discuss my opinion with logical reasoning. There are
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government
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being
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taught
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, it should ensure all necessary and
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subjects
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subjects
including arts and sports should be introduced in a system for
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of choice and
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upgradation
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by one body in authority all system would be running on merit without
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comprised
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evaluation system resulting in fair education
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world
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it allows uniformity in terms of
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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