You recently spent a weekend with your friend in her/his new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: explain what you like about his new house tell what you enjoyed most during your staying suggest when and where you could meet next time with her/him.

Dear Zaki Thank you so much for your hospitality, I had a great time at your new place
last
weekend. I can't even begin to describe how much I loved your new apartment, but what I really liked about it is the size of the living room, I was impressed by how big it is,
also
it is equipped with new furniture which makes it even more pleasant. As usual, spending time with you is always enjoyable for me, but the two activities that I enjoyed most in my
last
staying were definitely watching movies on your big 4K TV
as well as
exercising at your building's gym, those two activities were the highlight of our weekend. How about we meet again? I know that you were dying to dine at the new restaurant on 11th street, so do you fancy coming over next weekend for dinner there, afterwards we would go straight to the park and spend the rest of the evening there. I can't wait to hear from you all the best Youcef
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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