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Q:Some parents think it is good to give their children mobile phones ,while others disagree.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, most
children
 use a mobile phone
espasilay
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easily
 above thirteen years old because needed to study and communicate with colleagues and friends. So some
parents
 think it is a great idea to take a cell phone to
children
 to take care of them, opposite that opinion
parents
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don't need because there are a
lot
 of tools
instead
 mobile phones.
Overall
, there are a
lot
 of apps and web site for
children
 these days and we can support for
parents
 to study and improve their
children
 . For ,example Cambly,
the
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 Cambly learns English for adults and
children
, the kids who study every day with native speakers and give them
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mistakes
 them,
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the
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Cambly
their
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website in Saudi Arabia is called Eye, The Eye is web site supported by the Ministry of Education, the
learn
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 for a student from primary to high school and give them explain for all subject every time. The other opinion about giving mobile phones to
children
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 they said there are a
lot
 of problems with
this
 because the
children
 do not understand and have clear views for use mobile,
due to
 some
children
 using it without known
parents
,
however
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 there are many tools and advice we can use
instead
 mobile like computer or laptop. In conclusion, in my opinion is good to give their
children
 mobile phones because
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lot
 of advantages for them and more support for studying and improving themself but they don't mean it does not care for them.
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