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Write a letter to your friend about a book that you have read recently. Include the following in your letter: Describe the book. Why do you want him/her to read it? Tell him/her how to get the book.

#friend #book
Hiiii Amandeep, I hope you and your family doing well. I want to know something. Yesterday I went to the library and I found a very interesting
as well as
benefical
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beneficial
book
 for you . The
book
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 name is "Effective
time
 management"
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and it
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it
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is written by
famous
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the famous
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 author Kapil. I want you should read
this
book
 because you do not know how to handle
a
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apply
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time
 and you
always
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 late
from
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work
as well as
 study. In
this
book
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writter
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writer
written
 has very nicely explained how we can work on
time
 and save
time
 for our hobbies and other things. You can find
this
book
 in the library and
also
 you can take
this
book
 for one month and after finishing you can
return
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. I wish
this
book
 would be very
benenfical
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beneficial
 for you and I hope you will
be achieve
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 success in the future when you set up any business. Your friend Manpreet Kaur.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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