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People want to immigrate to rich countries. What are the reasons? Is this positive or negative?

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Moving from one place to another is a
life changing
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 journey for many. Netizens of several
countries
 choose to move to
more
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wealthier
countries
. In
this
 essay, I will discuss why they take the decision to do so and
it's
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postive
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positive
 and negative impacts. A chance to live a better
life
 is what many hope for when they cross the border. Their lives at home have been impacted negatively and they want a fresh start, a better start. People living in poorer nations suffer from war and want to move to their affluent counterparts, where
life
 is much more secure and offers better
oppurtunities
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opportunities
.
Furthermore
, many are escaping prosecution, be it religious or cultural, and
move
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 to affluent nations which might be more progressive. A better quality of
life
 is one of
it's
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 main benefits. Those who are escaping conflicts get a new lease on
life
 and are able to breathe safely.
Consequently
, they are able to create a happy future which might've been impossible if they stayed back. They
also
 get a chance to mingle with a different culture, which broadens their mind and thought processes. Richer
countries
also
 provide them a chance with better options,
for
instance
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 better pay, education and jobs.
Besides
 that, the province they immigrate to,
gain
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 a lot in manpower.
However
, immigration to richer places leads to a brain and resource drain.
Countries
 struggling continue to struggle with no better future in sight as
it's
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 potential slips away.
It's
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 valuable resource is transferred to a country already with money which
further
 weakens them. Many abandon their homes and feel isolated in
an
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 place that might not accept them, which leads to depression and
weakened
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 mental state. In conclusion, immigration has its reasons and they are all equally valid. But, as the numbers increase
everyday
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, the disparity between the wealthy and
destitute
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 will only increase.
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