The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
The provided line chart displays the number of enquires got by the Tourist Information Officer in one particular city for about six months in the year 2011.
Overall
, it can be seen that the statistic of enquires by face-to-face and telephone increased significantly,
while
, enquires through the latter or email decreased over the period of time. The total number of inquiries by telephone was the highest in the month of January, it was around 900, after that, it
howred
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showed
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till April between 800 to 1000,
then
it rose significantly for the next two months and reached 1600 inquiries.
While
, enquiries through person-to-person were at the least at the beginning, which is nearly above 400 but it climbed consistently through the period and stood at the top almost 1900.
On the other hand
, the figure for inquiries by the latter or email stood at nearly 750 in the month of January,
then
, it dropped continuously for the next four months and reached below 400 and
this
figure remain steady for the next month.
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  • enquiries
  • Tourist Information Office
  • in person
  • by letter/email
  • by telephone
  • general trend
  • six-month period
  • significant increase
  • steady rise
  • decline
  • peak
  • fluctuations
  • monthly data
  • comparison
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