Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they are born. What might be the reasons for this? what are the advantages and disadvantages?
Nowadays,
although
it is true that people
need to leave their hometown
to become successful in life
, some communities spend their whole life
near to
their Change preposition
apply
hometown
. This
essay will outline the possible reasons of
Change preposition
for
this
trend and provide a number of benefits and drwabacks
of it.
To commence with, the possible reasons why Correct your spelling
drawbacks
people
live their whole life
near to hometown
are so many. The first reason is that they spend their childhood and educational
near to their Replace the word
education
hometown
. Consequently
, people
feel more comfortable,
and are aware of a sense of Remove the comma
apply
near by
communities. Correct your spelling
nearby
Furthermore
, the whole families of those people
are staying near to their hometown
, so it it
Correct your spelling
is
covenient
Correct your spelling
convenient
to
them to travel and meet those relatives. Change preposition
for
For instance
, my relatives are living in town
near to my Add an article
a town
hometown
''Gandhinagar'. As a result
, I go there twice in a
six months to become relax.
On the one hand, there are several possible advantages why some Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
people
spend their lives close to their hometown
. Firstly
, they may feel secure and comfortable in the area where they are born. In other words
, they are aware of the places where they can feel secure, and they know neighbourhoods to
which they can trust and live Change preposition
in
with
Change preposition
apply
comfortable
. Change the word
comfortably
Secondly
, those people
may be feel confidence
to Replace the word
confident
establishing
any small businesses near Wrong verb form
establish
to
their Change preposition
apply
hometown
because they know what are interests of those surronding
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surrounding
people
live
there.
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who live
On the other hand
, there are also
a number of disadvantages of
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to
this
fact. One of the drawbacks of this
trend is that people
cannot know about outer
Correct article usage
the outer
life
and cultures of different regions. Consequently
, they have
not much trust Add a missing verb
do have
on
those outer communities. Change preposition
in
As a result
, their
next generations Change the word
the
also
follow the same rules,
and become less Remove the comma
apply
knowledgable
. Another obvious problem is that Correct your spelling
knowledgeable
people
become introvert
and they cannot grow Replace the word
introverted
themselves
Correct pronoun usage
apply
further
. In other words
, they cannot expand their horizons.
In conclusion, some people
left their hometown
to become more successful in life
, while
other people
stay near to their hometown
because they feel secure and comfortable. There are number
of pros and cons of Change the article
a number
the number
this
trend like people
have
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having
sense
of security and having touch with their family. Add an article
a sense
Moreover
, people
limit themselves in
small Change preposition
to
region
, and, Fix the agreement mistake
regions
as a result
, they are not growing in terms of techonology
.Correct your spelling
technology
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