Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they are born. What might be the reasons for this? what are the advantages and disadvantages?
Nowadays,
although
it is true that Linking Words
people
need to leave their Use synonyms
hometown
to become successful in Use synonyms
life
, some communities spend their whole Use synonyms
life
near Use synonyms
to
their Change preposition
apply
hometown
. Use synonyms
This
essay will outline the possible reasons Linking Words
of
Change preposition
for
this
trend and provide a number of benefits and Linking Words
drwabacks
of it.
To commence with, the possible reasons why Correct your spelling
drawbacks
people
live their whole Use synonyms
life
near to Use synonyms
hometown
are so many. The first reason is that they spend their childhood and Use synonyms
educational
near to their Replace the word
education
hometown
. Use synonyms
Consequently
, Linking Words
people
feel more comfortableUse synonyms
,
and are aware of a sense of Remove the comma
apply
near by
communities. Correct your spelling
nearby
Furthermore
, the whole families of those Linking Words
people
are staying near to their Use synonyms
hometown
, so it Use synonyms
it
Correct your spelling
is
covenient
Correct your spelling
convenient
to
them to travel and meet those relatives. Change preposition
for
For instance
, my relatives are living in Linking Words
town
near to my Add an article
a town
hometown
''Gandhinagar'. Use synonyms
As a result
, I go there twice in Linking Words
a
six months to become relax.
On the one hand, there are several possible advantages why some Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
people
spend their lives close to their Use synonyms
hometown
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, they may feel secure and comfortable in the area where they are born. Linking Words
In other words
, they are aware of the places where they can feel secure, and they know neighbourhoods Linking Words
to
which they can trust and live Change preposition
in
with
Change preposition
apply
comfortable
. Change the word
comfortably
Secondly
, those Linking Words
people
may be feel Use synonyms
confidence
to Replace the word
confident
establishing
any small businesses near Wrong verb form
establish
to
their Change preposition
apply
hometown
because they know what are interests of those Use synonyms
surronding
Correct your spelling
surrounding
people
Use synonyms
live
there.
Correct pronoun usage
who live
On the other hand
, there are Linking Words
also
a number of disadvantages Linking Words
of
Change preposition
to
this
fact. One of the drawbacks of Linking Words
this
trend is that Linking Words
people
cannot know about Use synonyms
outer
Correct article usage
the outer
life
and cultures of different regions. Use synonyms
Consequently
, they Linking Words
have
not much trust Add a missing verb
do have
on
those outer communities. Change preposition
in
As a result
, Linking Words
their
next generations Change the word
the
also
follow the same rulesLinking Words
,
and become less Remove the comma
apply
knowledgable
. Another obvious problem is that Correct your spelling
knowledgeable
people
become Use synonyms
introvert
and they cannot grow Replace the word
introverted
themselves
Correct pronoun usage
apply
further
. Linking Words
In other words
, they cannot expand their horizons.
In conclusion, some Linking Words
people
left their Use synonyms
hometown
to become more successful in Use synonyms
life
, Use synonyms
while
other Linking Words
people
stay near to their Use synonyms
hometown
because they feel secure and comfortable. There are Use synonyms
number
of pros and cons of Change the article
a number
the number
this
trend like Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
have
Wrong verb form
having
sense
of security and having touch with their family. Add an article
a sense
Moreover
, Linking Words
people
limit themselves Use synonyms
in
small Change preposition
to
region
, and, Fix the agreement mistake
regions
as a result
, they are not growing in terms of Linking Words
techonology
.Correct your spelling
technology
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