You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: -explain why you want to leave your current job -describe what kind of job you are looking for -ask for some help or advice

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Dear Guddu, I hope everything is going well on your end. I am writing

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letter to seek your advice on getting a new job as I am leaving my current organisation. As you know, For the

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couple of days, I was asking for an appraisal from my manager but he is not responding appropriately.

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, I have decided to resign as I am not feeling comfortable working in that type of organisation where seniors do not consider their teammate's aspirations.

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my profile is of Accountant, it's a bit difficult for me to perform data entry tasks. I'm currently looking for a job as an Accountant in North York since my place is nearby the city. It will be easy to commute. My preference is to get hired as a senior accountant ,not a data entry operator as I already worked in the same position for 2 years. I need your assistance to find out appropriate companies where I can work

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my skills and qualifications. It would be helpful if you provide me with any references. Looking forward to hearing from you. Pay my regard to my uncle and aunt. Yours truly Heena

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

213 words

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You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: -explain why you want to leave your current job -describe what kind of job you are looking for -ask for some help or advice

The Closing

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