Some people argue that space exploration has had more to do with national pride than international effort. To what extent do you agree with this? How do you think space exploration will change in the future?

Space

can be considered as a location

that is

not ordinary to certain people but

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. It is often argued that international

cooperation

will strengthen

the

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space

exploration

and it might experience changes in the future.

However

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as to whether it is a blessing or curse, there arises a heated debate among people. As far I’m concerned, international

cooperation

will reduce the expenditure and expedite the

process

while

the

exploration

might shift to artificial intelligence in the future.

Firstly

,

space

explorations are totally different

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other kinds of scientific experiment and it requires

large

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amount of funding.

Thus

, it is a way much better to have

a

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cooperation

between countries not just only for the funding but

also

the

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involved

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of elites. Meaning to say, professionals from different countries can provide their valuable

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to expedite

the

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space

exploration

.

For example

, Nasa always carried out a few conferences yearly with different countries’

space

engineers to collect more data for the improvement of a specific project. Astronaut often risk their precious life to carry out an experimental

process

in

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a different planets

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. Unfortunately, I strongly believe that artificial intelligence will soon supersede the astronaut’s duty.

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not only will reduce the risk taken by

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but

also

have the ability to provide

an

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accurate data. AI is considered

as

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a non-living organism which they can withstand

on

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a critical environment in

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space

which human

being

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can’t resist on it.

For instance

, it is worth mentioning that Nasa had sent a few monkeys to

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Mars during the

exploration

process

as they carried

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relatively similar genetic material

with

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human

being

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. In conclusion,

according to

the examples and arguments given, I strongly agree that

space

exploration

requires the

cooperation

from different countries for the well-being of the project itself and the

exploration

process

will be replaced by artificial intelligence in order to ensure the astronaut’s safety.