Some people argue that space exploration has had more to do with national pride than international effort. To what extent do you agree with this? How do you think space exploration will change in the future?
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cooperation
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For example
, Nasa always carried out a few conferences yearly with different countries’ Linking Words
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engineers to collect more data for the improvement of a specific project.
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. Unfortunately, I strongly believe that artificial intelligence will soon supersede the astronaut’s duty. Correct the article-noun agreement
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exploration
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will be replaced by artificial intelligence in order to ensure the astronaut’s safety.Use synonyms
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