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some people use socialmedia to keep in touch with others and new events do you think advantages this techniques outweight the dis advantages

#people #socialmedia #touch #events #techniques #outweight #dis
In recent years, social networks like Facebook and Instagram are more and more popular.
This
 helps
people
 connect to each other without face-to-face
meeting
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meetings
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. It is agreed that the benefits of social networks outweigh
its
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their
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 drawbacks. In
this
eassy
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essay
, we will discuss the
convinience
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convenience
 and flexibility of
the
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apply
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social media to make our life better. On the one hand,
People
 can really take advantage of communicating with
people
 from
long
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a long
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 distance and receiving notifications immediately.
For instance
, you can connect and have a chat with your friends in different countries through your smartphone. It is awesome that you can connect to everyone over the world whenever and wherever you want.
In addition
, special events will send notifications to your phone for
invitation
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invitations
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instead
 of going to the place.
On the other hand
, It is said that social media is a kind of drug
and
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that
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make
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makes
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people
 addicted.
For example
,
people
 spend so much time talking with their friends and
that is
 the reason they admit that they can not live without their phone.
This
 makes
people
 less productive and affects their mental health in
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the long-term
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long-term
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long term
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. In conclusion, social media has advantages and disadvantages. But I think the benefits outweigh the drawbacks because it helps
people
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people's
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 life much easier and better.
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