You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Madhur Bathla. I am writing
this
letter with reference to a Cookery course which I have recently completed at your school. The
overall
course covered everything necessary to become an expert in cooking. I enjoyed those sessions where I and the other students were given the chance to experiment and cook cuisines from different countries across the globe.
In addition
, I
also
loved the company of my batchmates from different corners of the world. I have started incorporating all those learnings into practicals.
Moreover
, Since the course was completed, I have been consistently preparing dishes once every day.
Also
, on weekends I experiment with cuisines which are new to me. I would like to recommend the school to come up with more extended courses for 6 months to 1 year.
Such
courses will help beginners to learn in a more detailed way and become experts in cooking meals. Thank you for all the learnings! Sincerely, Madhur Bathla
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