The government should be responsible for providing retirees with financial support and care. While many people think that citizens should save money to take care of themselves when they are old. Discuss both views and give your opinion

People

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have different views about financial

support

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and care for retired older

people

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. Some

people

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believe that the

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should guarantee their welfare,

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others claim that citizens have a responsibility to manage themselves by saving their budget before they retire. On the one hand, the national budget is limited. In fact,

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who argue that individuals should save their money to prepare for their retirement without

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from governments focus on another sector which requires

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from the

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. Each country has different issues which have to be solved quickly. Some of them may have to invest to ease other problems

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as low

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, high unemployed

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and raising start-up companies.

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, Korea is struggling with a low

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of new babies nowadays. In these cases, the

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should invest a large amount of tax to encourage women to give birth and make an environment where

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relieve the burden of growing their children

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of giving retirees financial aid.

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, there is a more important reason why we have to provide financial care for the retired

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.

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with, generally, if the

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does not

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them, they may experience obstacles to maintaining their lives because it is difficult for the retired old to get a new job. If

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have to live with their saved money only without any

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, the issue of poverty of older

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will be more serious.

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this

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reason, the

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should keep supporting the retirees. In conclusion,

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each country has to invest their budget in various sectors

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different problems they are facing, I am opinion that guaranteeing retired

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is more important

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their former contribution and the right to keep their minimum standard of life after they are retired.