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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the hoise or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#countries #people #history #hoise #research
As an introduction, it is important to research
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the past of the
residence
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 we live in, and most
of
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the
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people are keen to learn about that. So, in the following
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 I would like to emphasize
about
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the facts regarding that matter. Every building or house has a past that involves
with
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the people, which could be a good or bad thing.
Firstly
, it is important to
findout
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find out
 about the details of previous owners and their lifestyle, as it can be a matter for the present residents.
Furthermore
, many residents face some legal issues, if they did not pay attention to the legal aspect of the property, which can
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 up in
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 later.
In addition
, the quality of the place is far more
valuble
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valuable
 as it can be detrimental. There are so many ways to get
informations
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 about the places.
Initially
, we can ask
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the neighbours to gather some knowledge, as it is the easiest route.
Moreover
, local libraries can be useful for collecting data as some of the libraries store old
news papers
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 and articles. If the new buyers are interested enough, the former owners can be tracked down and discissions can be arranged. In conclusion, searching the former aspect of the residence is a
necesaary
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necessary
 thing as it can be detrimental to the current buyers.
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 they are enthusiastic, finding the facts is an easy thing.
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