Due to increase use of aeroplane, air pollution is increasing more and more airports are constructed. Some people say that government should reduce air traffic by taxing it heavily. Do you agree or disagree?

To
travel
across continents and far away cities, aeroplanes have been the primary choice of travellers across the globe in the past decade. One school of thought opines that
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should impose higher taxes to oppress
air
traffic to control
air
pollution. I disagree with
this
statement and will elaborate
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statement to support my viewpoint. To commence with,
aviation
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industry employs people from different backgrounds
such
as engineers, accountants, technology experts and many unskilled labourers. If additional taxes are imposed,
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people will
travel
due to
high costs resulting in diminishing jobs in the aviation industry.
This
will lead to unemployment in the
country
.
For instance
, in Sri Lanka,
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built airport was forced to close down within five years of
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due to
high
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cost of
air
travel
which led to huge losses to airport management and
as a
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all the employees were fired leading to unemployment.
Moreover
, many courier services and essential medical supplies and equipment companies operate through
air
courier services. With increased taxes, essential
courier
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and medical supplies would
also
get expensive and affordability would become an issue for the general public.
Additionally
, tourism will be adversely impacted for the nation
due to
costly
air
travel
. The
country
will
then
, not earn any foreign exchange resulting in declining foreign
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and low GDP for the
country
.
For example
, Thailand earns
majority
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of its foreign reserves through tourism. If the
country
experiences low tourism
due to
high
travel
costs, sustaining the local infrastructure and services for its citizens will become difficult,
thus
leading to
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to crumble
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.
Furthermore
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to
air
travel
across continents is sea
travel
which is already costly and highly
air
polluting which makes
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air
travel
more
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appealing choice to the general public.
To conclude
,
air
travel
is
essential
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an essential
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part of our daily lives from business and leisure
travel
to sending essential medical and utilities across countries. Increasing
travel
cost
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costs
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will greatly impact the costs of daily utilities and adverse effect on the nation’s economy,
therefore
, I completely disagree with the statement.
Submitted by Harmeet Singh Khera on

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